Sunday, August 25, 2013

Bruin Bedtime Tales


The Flaxen-Haired One was a thief…despoiler of food and destroyer of furnishings. Shamelessly seeking rest from debauchery in the bed of an innocent, I say she deserved a worse fate than she received.


This story was written for the weekly Trifextra Writing Challenge. This week's challenge was to tell a children's bedtime story in 33 words exactly. I decided to go with the bears' version of Goldilocks. 

5 comments:

  1. If anything, this will teach kids some good vocabulary. This is funny and cute. Thank you for linking up!

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  2. Seriously. I never did like that Goldilocks. Love the perspective and I love the use of flaxen-haired and debauchery. Excellent work!

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  3. Seriously! Who just breaks into someone's home and settles in?

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